I really liked the text at the start, that made me laugh, I'm guessing that you edited this with Sony Vegas, that would be my guess as I do a lot of editing myself, the video is good all in all, you seem very skilled at PVP, if I had to give it any constructive criticism to improve though, I'd say focus more on the color correction, it seems a tad tinted and dark, I would recommend you looking into Magic Bullet Looks, if you already have it then great, and if not it might be just what you need to improve your CC, besides that, great video! <3
I would say that this is a really well made montage and I can tell that you gave a lot of attention to the details specially the parts where the background music hits but I think you gotta decrease that a little bit because you made it a lot that some parts seems useless don't get me wrong it is still sick and good but you didn't had to put it every few seconds which may cause some people get annoyed from it since not everyone is into the things which are really loud but otherwise than that I can tell you that it is brilliant and I liked your pvp/gameplay aswell keep up the great work!
No worries dude, if you need any help installing MBL, or don't know how to use it, add me on Discord from my signature below, I'll be happy to walk you through it.
What was the texture pack in the first clip? Awesome video, I'll have to remember to stay away from you in sg :)
