Hey, can I get a 1-10 rate on my song I made on my crush? I respect everyone's opinion on what rating they give me and will get better from it. https://m.soundcloud.com/ninjaknowbest-101/luck-prod-jammybeatz Thanks for taking the time to listen to it. Curses are in the song. Edit: Curses are in the song.
Heyo! The beat is nice, and the lyrics are good too. Although, vocals are a bit lacking. Also, unless your girlfriend loves cussing, I don't know if some words were of the best choice. I do see potential, though! Keep improving and I'm sure you'll get the hang of it! Hope you have a good day or night!
Why are you asking here lol. This is a minecraft server, your chances of finding someone who has decent, if any, experience in song writing is very low.
The beat matches your lyrics so thats pretty good. The thing I'd say is to fix the vocals. Add some autotune in it (not saying your voice is bad) but I'd believe it would make it sound nicer and smoother. Your flow is something you can also improve on but it sounds good man.
Not my point at all. I'm just saying your chances of getting any professional advice on music production here is slim.
Thanks bro, I added a little of autotune but something that people cant hear, if I added more, some of my lyrics would get that robotic voice.
I feel like this was recorded in a regular room or something. Your vocals are reverberating a lot, and it sounds kinda off. If you plan on recording again, turn your head away from the mic when you breathe in between lyrics, as I could hear a fairly sharp breath sound in the song. One other thing, your music is too quiet. I would suggest making the voice track/music track around 60-40, or as close as you can get it. If either track is too loud or too quiet, it takes away from the listening experience. Other than that, awesome job!
Thanks bro, It is a regular room with no sound pads and I can agree my vocals were off and my voice was a little low. Planning on buying a new mic for it though.
Hopefully your girlfriend likes rapping and doesn’t mind swearing, and it’s god, I’ll say 7- but if your recording the song again try to pronounce the words more.
Pretty good! Although, like everyone else said the vocals need some improvement. I agree with Steph on adding a little bit of autotune to smooth things out a bit. I don't know much about music but you are 100% better than me <3. I would rate it a solid 7.
Ok I might remake it after the feedback, where in the vocals of the song would you like me to improve into? I will also change up the swearing just incase she dont like curses lmao. Thanks.
I thinks its a 7, and mostly agree with everyone, I just have a question. Are you going to show this to your crush, or is this just about her?
